eat her whole!
Eat her whole
knickers and soul
take her sexuality and use it to feed your own.
don’t whatever you do die alone
every dog needs a bone
and every dog as they say will have its day
she’s a woman you’re a man
what more is there to understand?
We are talking chemistry
We are talking about the lust you keep in your cage
In the metaphorical basement of your mind
I am sure she wants you can’t you feel it behind,
her body language.
Like in those magazines you didn’t let your mother know about
At some point you will need to let the beast free
but only responsibly!
Jeff Dawson
Sun 7th Dec 2008 20:11
Hi Daniel, good work enjoyed this. Just one thing, I might have said on last line something like 'but please do it responsibly' - puts a bit more emphasis and rhythm in the finish, cheers Jeff