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Conversations With An Angel


How many folk have ever had the chance,
to converse with an angel and to glance,
into the eyes of one who flies where they will,
one who we know will never swoop to make a kill...

Up amongst the eagles they may choose to fly,
and perhaps they share the falcon's sharper eye,
does greater vision let them know reasons why mankind,
seems ever ready to break their fellows in spirit & mind?

Some rush for more than they could ever really need,
hoarding gold that illustrates their endless greed,
polished diamonds cut to dazzle the poor mans sight,
what care does that show for their kindreds plight?

Please angels will you converse with those that take,
far more than they need for we must now break,
with past excesses that only served the favoured few,
surely now it's time to take a more measured view...

©Rhumour
March 5th 2012

philosophy

◄ Worlds Apart

no No NO NO! ►

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 17th Jun 2012 00:12

We think writing poems like this one Dave
will surely earn you a pair of wings.

Are you much cop on the harp by the way?

Lorra love-UZ-2.xx

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Mon 11th Jun 2012 10:54

Thanks Lynn, you are right, we need more angels to help put the world to rights! :) Best wishes, Dave.

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Lynn Dye

Sun 10th Jun 2012 21:46

Hi Dave, I enjoyed this, especially the sentiment it led to - we could certainly do with a few more kindly angels to put things right!

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