I request ...
Tie me to every beat of your heart
Make my hours your hours,
my desires your attention, a pretext,
a reason to think that we will have a beautiful crowning
I request the sea, the earth itself, the sun,
the fusion of our bodies,
the warmth of your kisses
I request... a fragment of tenderness to this love
©Noris Roberts
<Deleted User> (6895)
Fri 3rd Aug 2012 20:32
Really lovely poem Noris.
May we suggest a change to the last line?
" I request...more
than just a fragment from this love".xx