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i like the changes in the first three stanzas here, Marianne from i to she to they.
this is a very clever piece and it's beauitfully paced.
wonderful.
Ooo I do like this. Love the repetition of the somebody elses, with the twists on that,and those last two verses are absolute killer.
twilight throats of opal song,
loved in shapes of purple, oil and sun
that's some of the most beautiful imagery I've ever read by you.
you should send this to a publisher - Magma or some such perhaps?
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Marianne Louise Daniels
Sat 18th Aug 2012 22:23
Thank you for your time and comments.
Laura - I am really touched by your response. Thank you
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