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Scarecrow

 
 
I am somebody else -
tree hearted, rung with autumn;
my hands stroking the hard air,
a dream too fast with silver shrieks
and black tooth combs the Sky divided,
throttled with flight and fear.
 
 
She is somebody else -
a veil of curious moods,
blue glues of pluto and white horses
and nailed I cannot compete -
the furrows strain their ears;
corn to make the moon fat, and the birds.
 
 
They are somebody else's -
twilight throats of opal song,
loved in shapes of purple, oil and sun -
a palette of a day that shifts,
born and dead upon a wing -
but can you not see this love?
 
 
My grimaces are somebody else's -
stitched cruel on parts I cannot close;
arms locked out in fight, unfair.
Please come near! My shoulder,
my chin, my chest -
nestle into me my friend, and do not disappear.
 
 
 

◄ Hallgrímskirkja

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Sat 18th Aug 2012 22:23

Thank you for your time and comments.

Laura - I am really touched by your response. Thank you

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Andy N

Fri 17th Aug 2012 10:21

i like the changes in the first three stanzas here, Marianne from i to she to they.

this is a very clever piece and it's beauitfully paced.

wonderful.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 16th Aug 2012 16:28

Ooo I do like this. Love the repetition of the somebody elses, with the twists on that,and those last two verses are absolute killer.

twilight throats of opal song,
loved in shapes of purple, oil and sun

that's some of the most beautiful imagery I've ever read by you.

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garside

Thu 16th Aug 2012 13:27

you should send this to a publisher - Magma or some such perhaps?

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