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The obsession of my desire ( part 1 )

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Words of my adore I send to you,

To bring you to my side.

I tell you of the love I feel,

And ring one thousand times.

Softley I do leave my voice, that you may one day listen,

Then scream to the Phone to strike you down !!!

My passion, consuming like a Shroud ....

 

I leave you trinkets on your step,

A cup, blanket,a new girl friends personal effects,

So you can see me wanting.

yet your Silence is a barrier that I can not overcome,

For imagary of your sweet caress beats within me like a drum.

and I see our lives before me together we do stand,

You are my girl, me at my best, my passion finally in my hand.

 

I feel your precence in all I do..

A seat at a meal, my future ideal,

But you !!! ... you will not listen !!

And every day from my covert place,

I watch you from my car,

For to me you are my everything, my one guiding star......

 

You tell me that I frighten you,

Maybe you are right...

So I send you flowers to your door,

And love songs by the score.

To show you of my desire.

For you my LOVE !!!

My redemption from this fire....

you are the obsession of my desire....

 

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THE Obsession of my desire ( part 2 ) ►

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tracey bucknell

Thu 16th Aug 2012 21:07

hahahahha jeff.. it is psycho john Lmho..
seriously though..thank you for your nice comment, i'm glad you liked it :))XX

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Jeff Dawson

Thu 16th Aug 2012 20:58

I've been going out with a girl, her name is Julie, but one she said to me as we were watching tele! She said..... Reminded me a bit of the Jilted John single Tracey!

Seriously though, great writing and nice occasional rhyming in each stanza, Particularly like the twist at the end of the first stanza where the admirer snaps, great stuff! X

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