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The Offenders dead hand.

The Offenders dead hand.

 

The devil animates

The Offenders dead hand,

That serves ice-cream to children

That turns into sand.

Trusted with a title

He hid the offence,

He tempted me

With sugar and guile,

While secretly

Abusing my friend

With bribes of pocket money for innocence to spend

I can still see his face quite clearly in my mind’s eye

And I know that I probably always will, until the day I die,

I thought it strange

That a man like he

Would want to be Friends

With a young boy like me,

I looked in his house

That’s as far as it goes,

Then rode off on my bicycle

Quickly up the road.

The devil animates

The Offenders dead hand

That serves ice-cream to children

That turns into sand.                                                           Paul Maxey 2012.

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Comments

<Deleted User> (6315)

Wed 22nd Aug 2012 11:20


You know something?..I believe this would be a lot stronger if you took out the word Paedophile?..maybe jus 'His Dead Hand?'

I think sometimes you have to be a bit ambiguous to make others think about what you are saying..only my personal opinion of course :)

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