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CASTING LOTS

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CASTING LOTS

 

Beauty yet resides in redbrick

Surrounded by railings

Charm in coloured tiles

A touch of stained glass

Roofs that sag still uplift

Spirits made melancholy

By the grimness of concrete

Rusting window frames

Though difficult to open

Allow freshness to enter

 

 

Not so in the stale chambers

Of breeze block and plastic

Choked by failed ventilation

Those municipal temples

Where business is conducted

Hands touching across

Dismal drawing boards

Sketching dreary visions

Dreaming of demolitions

Casting lots for salvage.

 

(c)David Subacchi.2012

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David Subacchi

Thu 1st Nov 2012 21:00

Thank you Patricia and Stefan.

:)

David

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David Subacchi

Tue 25th Sep 2012 00:05

You can catch more of my work including videos by searching on SUBACCHI+POEM.

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David Subacchi

Mon 24th Sep 2012 23:59

Thanks Gregg.

At the crucifixion the soldiers cast lots for Christ's clothes just as those who demolish churches salvage and sell the fittings.

That's what I had in mind anyway.

David

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Greg Freeman

Mon 24th Sep 2012 23:00

You build a convincing picture from impersonal construction materials to produce an attack on council planners. Not sure about the title, but I enjoyed the images.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 9th Sep 2012 22:49

A nicely summed up piece of poetry!

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