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SEPTEMBER

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SEPTEMBER

 

September arrived quietly

With the morning train

Catching us unawares

Still tanned from summer

Smoking in the goods yard

Discussing holidays

Reading of redundancies

 

A radio humming news

Of road accidents

And unexplained murders

In distant countries

Celebrity indiscretions

Distracting our attention

From gathering clouds

 

And after all these days

It’s difficult to tell

Where one season ends

And another starts

In the crowded station

Buffet on platform three

We spotted September

With a rolled up newspaper

And a lukewarm cup of tea.

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David Subacchi

Tue 25th Sep 2012 00:05

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David Subacchi

Tue 25th Sep 2012 00:01

Many thanks again Greg.


This was written in a station canteen on a rainy day.

David

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Greg Freeman

Mon 24th Sep 2012 22:54

The last five lines of this are the ones that captured me, David. An unusual take on the seasons ... and originality is not easy to come by.

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