Crescent Moon (Rewrite)
crescent moon
sliver of gold
hovers over
clouds of pink
in wide expanse
of bluest blue
as sun sets
on august night.
great day out
meeting good friends
stony beach on sussex coast,
fish’n’chip lunch at seaside café,
walking the dog on concreted prom
warm and cloudy, sultry day
just a breeze along the coast
sharing stories, exchanging views
invited back to holiday home
converted barn providing interest,
eats and drinks, many laughs,
good times over all too soon.
late sun just appearing
in time to set
crescent moon
spotted again
through tall trees
darkening skies
just a sliver
gold turned silver
as she heralds
journey home.
Lynn Dye
Thu 20th Sep 2012 20:01
Thank you guys. It would seem minimalist doesn't always work! Cheers. xx