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Forever

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FOREVER

 

Forever is a twinkling light far out where the black is empty

Is the forever I see the same one that you see?

What happens if we overshoot forever

In our eager flight through time?

 

Forever is a tolling bell whose tones call low and clear

Does your forever sound like mine?

What is the tune you hear?

What happens if the rhythm slows?

And changes all of time?

 

Tomorrow, waiting patiently her turn

Upon time’s stage,

Watches from the twinkling light,

Waits till today is done

Hears the tinkling summons to leave time’s beating wings

What if she forgets her lines?

What if tomorrow doesn’t come?

The New Me ►

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Mon 5th Nov 2012 22:51

"where the black is empty?" hope not Yvonne!
the Sun and Moon come in very handy now and again.
Enjoyed ne'er the less.x

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 5th Nov 2012 22:45


Yvonne,
wish you wouldn`t frighten me with last lines like that.

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Anthony Emmerson

Mon 5th Nov 2012 02:36

Am definitely setting my alarm clock after reading this Yvonne! "Procrastination . . . " etc!

Regards,
A.E.

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John Coopey

Sun 4th Nov 2012 17:30

This would go well with an audio, Y. It would put me out my misery of deciding whether it has deliberate metre or deliberately not.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 4th Nov 2012 09:37

Oh Yvonne!
we thank you for this one.
(no rhyme intended)xx

steve mellor

Sun 4th Nov 2012 06:34

All we can do is hope

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