A Close Call Scenario
Deer perks up stares around in all directions.
Fails to see
The Lion in the Distance.
Deer presumes feeding.
Lion moves
paw by paw
devouring the Earth with delicate steps.
Every method of skulk and treasured
jewellery feet.
Claws clip and
chance the branches
fallen a million
years before
and now the shadow
of death resembles sunlight.
What animals think is of some concern.
Can deer feel guilty?
The deer looks guilty
and the lion leaps forward.
A straggle of bone and claw,
a growl and a whisper.
Sunken lion tooth
deer flesh sags
opens up clean
deer in a heap.
The lion keeps a chew.
He almost didn't get him.
Ray Miller
Mon 3rd Dec 2012 14:41
and now the shadow
of death resembles sunlight.
What animals think is of some concern.
Can deer feel guilty?
The deer looks guilty
and the lion leaps forward
I thought those were the best lines. What Animals Think would be a good title.
Deer resumes feeding,I,er, presume.
Treasured jewellery feet is a bit tautologous.
Have to say I don't see the significance of the final 2 lines.