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First Foot-fall

Listen for the first foot-fall:

Sunken pads in the winter snow,

The patter of ducks to bread,

Silence

As Venus hauls the sun from her bed

To drip across the sky.

 

Waiting for the first footing,

Heavy on the ice,

And Giggling across the carpet,

Feet spread like paeonies,

Embracing arms,

She learns to fly.

 

 

 

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Isobel

Sat 15th Dec 2012 15:37

This is lovely Jane - light of hand and very enjoyable.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Thu 13th Dec 2012 15:42

most enjoyable.x

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Cathy

Thu 13th Dec 2012 12:26

I love the sounds and images- the giggling and duck feet.

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