Jon Ridgeway

Jesus Christ : The Real Man

by Jon Ridgeway

Tuesday 9th August 2011 9:40 am (first posted Tuesday 13th January 2009 5:11 pm)

JESUS CHRIST : THE REAL MAN

Jesus was a gnostic atheist who preached the simple truth

All us bastards only joke our dad was God's spilt juice

Jesus didn't think anyone would be stupid enough to take him seriously

But fundamental retards somehow found a twist deliriously

It's time for us to see Christ's point and get the virgin birth jape

His mother, Mary wasn't really a victim of bestial rape

A messiah came when the peace-lover joined up all the free men

Not when an omnipotent blame-victim gushed His able semen

The point is that we're all God or the devil

Depending on which half of us is self-responsible

There's no devil below or God above

Just a choice here and now between fear and love

Fear may build bombs of what powers the sun

But the eyes of love see all of us as one!

Stop wanting weapons of mass destruction

Choose love and affection, feeling suction!!!

Broken Wind ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (5646)

Tue 4th Aug 2009 11:48

I also believe that god or good and the devil or evil lives within each of us now and the choice is ours which one we live by.
I also agree that Mary was no virgin.

As you say, a lot of things get twisted along the way according to what you believe or want to believe about what others tell you is true.

Makes sense to me anyway.

Janet.x

Jon Ridgeway

Sun 18th Jan 2009 12:11

My point is that good and evil (God and the devil if you call them that) are choices we all make here and now, and are always love and fear (in every sentient being). Clarissa shouldn't feel insulted because she seems to be making exactly the same point!

clarissa mckone

Wed 14th Jan 2009 04:15

Hi Jon,Nice and interesting poem. I guess Im a fundemental retard.Im very happy with that.For me the virgin birth is a no point subject, and not worth words.Even if the writters of the bible put it there, its of no value.We all have the ability to have the spirit of Good within us, or the spirit of evil within us. The best trick ever, played on humans is the devil card, I have seen the devil/evil in humans, thus I, a retard believe hes/she is real.The energy comes from somplace.Thus it is real.Poor translations of the bible give the impression that the devil is below/ hell is below, but hell is here.Greed builds bombs, that can blow up the sun 7 times over.As long as greed rules the world, there will be bombs, and power hungry bankers, and liers.If we got rid of all those types of people, we could be one, and through poetry and music we are one to a point. Im not sure about the suction, my government sucks the people dry. good poem one that makes you think and wonder!

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