Past Midnight
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in a wood in the dark
by the pass not a sound
but the cars and the shift
of the leaves at my feet.
and I write in the dark
and I walk in the dark
and I piss in the dark,
and I stand in the rise of my steam.
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Comments
Thanks for the comments.
Steve - 'unaffected' as always' ;)
Laura- I'm glad it suggests something. ;)
Mmm I like this too, has a lovely rhythm to it, and manages to evoke the scene in very few lines.
Is there a reason why you have - at the start and end? If it's deliberate, which I think it must be cos it's you, then it suggests missing lines...something unseen, unsaid.
graphicaly dark.
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Travis Brow
Fri 22nd Feb 2013 11:03
Mint.