Way Out By the Rapeseed Field
Way out by the rapeseed field
The bridge and crossing, standing stern
Reflecting in the late afternoon
The breeze lifting the haze adrift.
As the train went past, I saw the light
The endless fading words of honour
Sink or swim in the estuary
As the boughs floated, with the cracked tide.
A grain implanted in the soil
Gone back again to haunt my mind
I saw two bridges and the dam burst
My thoughts poured forth like gushing water.
Poisoned in the blood-red dusk
Passing under shaded bays
With diluted evil’s watch on every corner
The crossing lights fail, the stone gives in.
Another chapter gone to water
Floated out to sea, this peaceful cerebral harmony
The joys of paranoia, stretched out
To the Nth degree.
David Cooke
Mon 25th Feb 2013 08:20
Hi David. Thanks for kind comment on my Montale and the Hoopoe poem. Just read and enjoyed this one of yours. You definitely have your own slant on things.