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Angry Autumn

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Wet, cold, biting musk

Fire, smoke, leaves on the fresh ground

Like soggy bran flakes.

 

 

NB: First haiku on here.  I know it's not the season as such, but this one's been kicking around for a while and I'd like to share it.  Cheers.

2011

◄ Castaway

Way Out By the Rapeseed Field ►

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Gareth Glyn Roberts

Fri 26th Jul 2013 09:15

Brilliant. Love the soggy bran flakes!

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David Blake

Sat 23rd Feb 2013 17:17

That's alright. Thanks for looking at it!

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Fkx

Wed 20th Feb 2013 08:20

Haiku is good, whatever season. Thanks for sharing!

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