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Blonde Memory

Still.

Perfume on the pillow

and

starlight in the wound

consuming

our forgotten futures.

 

A glisten of flesh in the moon

glow forming

in the soft place she slept.

 

New kiss, near past awake

on cold thought mornings

 

her mind, her skin,

the way of her hair

blonde on my chest in the dark.

 

Never the arguments

just the sparkly darkness

and quiet manufacture

 

of things long wanted.

◄ For A Short Time.

Words No Bigger Than Nails ►

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Rachel Bond

Fri 5th Apr 2013 04:21


i like that the voice in this is from an innocent place awakening/sleeping, 'just the sparkly darkness...' lovely image.

like the blonde way of her hair..nice title 'blonde' in the darkness... always thought the way women sleep on their mans chests' beautiful. its a beautiful act, to be beheld as here with love..ah real romance.

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BRIAN EVANS

Wed 3rd Apr 2013 11:37

love it B

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 2nd Apr 2013 19:34

Many innovative images, and a fine lyricism of verbal melody throughout.

I was hoping to meet you at the BOMP event last Thursday. Some day, I hope I shall - just to see your words in the flesh.

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Harry O'Neill

Tue 2nd Apr 2013 14:10


Quietly romantic

<Deleted User> (9882)

Mon 1st Apr 2013 19:10

well done Kealan.x

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 1st Apr 2013 11:12

Lovely poem.

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