Silent Critic
Silent Critic
Unmissable
in letters three feet high
across the bridge
they wrote
“KELLY MATTHEWS IS A WHORE”
and before
the paint was dry
Kelly carved
her sharp reply
in a deeper crimson shade
just two
short lines
as double edged
as Kelly’s blade
exposed the lie
that gave offence
- and their careless
use of tense.
Gus Jonsson
Tue 10th Feb 2009 16:40
Hi Anthony...told your face would stay like that!
Serious note... Silent Critic...Superb, stark like a crack of a whip!
Well Done.
Gus