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My Butter Fingered Mind

My Butter Fingered Mind

 

The poem I forgot

Would have been my bread and butter

A staple in anthologies

Where experts put a thousand

Of the best down to rest

And get credit for their edit

 

All the things I could have got

I might have bought a yacht

With the poem I forgot

 

I think its form was lyrical

It may have been satirical

 

But no! Its tone was serious

Noble and imperious

 

I wish I could recall

You’d have all been in my thrall

I’d have seemed like such a swot

With the poem I forgot

 

 

I don’t remember where I was

When I had the creative burst

If it all came in a flash

Or I wrote a few words first

 

But that’s the problem - I didn’t write

I mustn’t have had a pen

I possibly was in the car

So that explains it then

 

It doesn’t really matter though

The why, the where, the what

I’ve lost it now, it’s gone for good

The poem I forgot

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Siren

Thu 12th Feb 2009 22:27

Thank you both. When I read this at a recent Write Out Loud gig I introduced it as a poem for children because of the simplicity of the language. I had in mind the work of Hillaire Belloc or Spike Milligan.

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Belinda Johnston

Thu 12th Feb 2009 12:03

Dear Simon,

I liked this poem, mostly because it reaches a wide audience, and as a writers' we can empathise with your plight. I ;live in Japan at the moment, and I see things that take me by surprise alot of the time, and I think, dam you woman where is your bloody pen when you need it!! But now I always take a pen and pad out with me, it more often than not, when a feeling arises or I see something, it's when I forgot :)

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Wed 11th Feb 2009 21:13

Those little bursts of inspiration can come at the most awkward of times can't they?
I quite like the simplicity of this Simon.
Please forgive when i say it could speak volumes.

Love Janet.x

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