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From A High Window

Standing on the wide grey hill

The noontide skyscape hangs heavily

Like fog crafted from artists’ hands

Cities of unease hang invisible in the air.

 

They pour scorn on every hope in his heart

Picturing clouds unfurling with time

And shades of black rolling in on him.

 

A binocular gazer, from a high window

In the distance

Watches and waits, careful and calm

Whilst above the tumult fades with dusk.

 

Inside the bickering starts again

Passive whispers, turn to murmurs of concern

The figure remains silent on the peak

The source of that afternoon’s conversation.

 

Now by the fire orange-bright

Talk turns to him again

To that sorry sight.

 

‘The look of death upon him’

Years later one would say of him

‘He was standing there, for days on end’

‘Turning erratic, like a weathervane

‘An exile frozen, still

‘Without a name’.

52 Hertz

◄ Kiribati

Alone In Cyberspace ►

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Jon

Sat 20th Jul 2013 23:35

Great poem David! Unbelievably good first stanza!
By the way thanks for comments posted a couple of months back!

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Francine

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 04:54

Captures the mood of solitude well.

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Fri 31st May 2013 23:54

Very good and then some!x

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Isobel

Fri 31st May 2013 07:47

Yay - thanks for taking part David! I love the way you have let your imagination roam with this one - unless of course you ARE that man from a high window ;

'The noontide skyscape hangs heavily
Like fog crafted from artists’ hands'

sets the scene beautifully for the story that unfolds. I imagine scenes like this one are played out across the world - and that they leave behind the same sad conversations.

I like the title very much also - it leaves something to the imagination.

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