The walk home
Shuffling along the lane
his plain black jacket, flaps in the wind.
skipping in the darkness, wearing her new white dress
she sparkles
like a snowflake, her fuzzy outline
becoming, as he wipes his glasses clean.
lifting her arms up to the moonlight, pressing her cheek
against his woolly sleeve
her youthful freshness, washes over him
exhilarating, like reaching the mountain summit
spring in full bloom.
their shadows join - under the beam of the street lamp
guiding them home.
By Belinda Johnston
Belinda Johnston
Mon 16th Feb 2009 00:22
Thank you JT for your comments. I've been working on this poem for a couple of weeks, and I've been swapping and changing words and the order, but glad to hear that the reader was captured by the images and descriptions, many thanks again, Love Belinda