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Monday morning blues

Today I was reminded of those Monday Morning Blues

Those tall iron gates; Dr Martin shoes

 

The nauseating smell of soggy mash, morning breaks

the tuck shop dash

 

School mates remarks, full of anger and hate:

Stealing your erasers, rucksack-making you late

 

On the sports field, running for your life; tall ones’

Speed past you, a quick dig, sharp as a knife

 

Trying your best to keep up with the rest:

Looking down at your bosom, still wearing a vest

 

The stench of musty carpet on lecture theatre floor,

Bullies mocking ‘Robert Clegg’ him saying ‘no more!’

 

Wooden desk tops, scratched out with ‘I love Luke’

In blue biro pen: Wishing you were still five, hiding in a den

 

Today I was reminded of those Monday morning blues

Those tall iron gates; Dr Martin shoes.

 

By Belinda Johnston

 

◄ a space in my apartment

The walk home ►

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Steve Regan

Mon 2nd Mar 2009 10:29

Hi Belinda,
I think school is a rich vein for poets. The school is such a weird institution, when you think about it... taking children away from home, placing them with other children (in all their casual cruelty), dressing them in strange uniforms (at least in the British tradition)... I think Larkin got the emphasis wrong: mam and dad don't f*** kids up half as much as institutional schooling does.

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Jeff Dawson

Thu 26th Feb 2009 19:51

Hi Belinda, just catching up, hope all well with you in the far east!

Like the others really enjoyed this idea and poem, Jeff X

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Mon 16th Feb 2009 11:47

i really enjoyed this poem, you've highlighted so well the anxieties and self-conscious years in high school (best days of your life?) wishing you were still five hiding in a den- loved it.. i still do that!

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Gus Jonsson

Tue 27th Jan 2009 00:21

We couldn't afford rubbers....we used bread....
15 girls in the lower fifth were pregnent...

great poem
loved it!
Gus

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Mon 26th Jan 2009 22:24

Hi Belinda,
I like the pace of this poem. It's pleasantly speeded up as it runs along.
Janet.x

darren thomas

Mon 26th Jan 2009 21:25

Hi Belinda - 'erasers' - bloody hell! We had 'rubbers' at our school.

Hope Japan is treating you well.


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