Mental Health Incarceration
Mental Health Incarceration
In Pyjamas creased like discarded Paper
Shuffling aimlessly in worn down slippers
Come the fresh fodder for the Psychiatric Machine
Eyes staring intently into obscure realms of Fantasy
With word salad chatter so wayward and bewildering
For morning medication they agitatedly wait
Chlorpromazine drugged Psychotics, limbs tremoring like jelly
Heads full of voices, torturous and deluding
Bi-polar sufferers with their contrasting moods
From building Babel Towers to entrapment in dark catacombs
Pumped full of Lithium to provide that happy medium
They preside over castles of sand till they crumble to dust
Some pass the time completing incomplete jigsaws
Playing makeshift chess sets and marked up cards
Others stare blankly at the television screen
Minds devoid of substance watching weekday screened bile
Others dwell in madness with their delusions as comfort
Longing for the moment to be released to their fantasy society
But scuppered by their insanity on a Section 3 stay
Six months of confinement at the Psychiatrists pleasure
While the fortunate few who play the game
Are released to society in minimal time
Much to he envy of the detained and insane
Who become low and despondent in this cursed domain
But bear in mind for most the day will come
When they will breathe that air of liberty to be a person again
Saing goodbye to staff and hospital friends
To strut into society with a healthy rebuilt mind
Mr Dean Carroll
Sun 16th Jun 2013 18:59
Many thanks for your comments Cynthia. I have written a few poems on the mental health system, and found this to be one of the most difficult to write. I have to agree that the first few verses were the most striking, but found it hard to continue it, in that vein. Thanks for your interest and will take heed of the advice.
Cheers Dean