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I waited ...

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In the mist,

amazed at the helpless loneliness,

sadness was present to remember

especially when I loved you and now intend to deny

 

full of rain and wind, turn to screams your memories:

perhaps imagining that you understand how I feel

 

How I miss you!

I was not the cause of the pain ...

And I'll wait until it dries the dew;

until you have no more stars at night,

Neither beautiful roses spring

How I miss you!

©Noris Roberts

remembrance

◄ Today I know that you've gone

No finish line ►

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Noetic-fret!

Thu 25th Jul 2013 01:34

Hello Noris,

Nice writing.

Keep posting!

Mike

x

<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 5th Jul 2013 21:27

back on form girly girl!xx

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