Footle Poems
Mime Rhyme
Mime rhyme
In time
Dance
Up down
Around
Breeze
Some fun
In sun
Isabella
A cute
Patoot
House
A mouse
In house
Home
A cat
Big rat
Canada
A moose
Is loose
Happy
Love's kiss
What bliss
Scott
So shy
Sweet guy
Love
Let's dance
Romance
This is my meager attempt
at writing footle poems.
Harry O'Neill
Fri 26th Jul 2013 21:05
Shirley,
So this is `footle poetry`!
I`ve been thinking of thinned down down stuff like this as an attempt to strip the clutter of `scientific` rhetoric from some of the wonders that go on around us. (my canal lock thing)
The two syllable - two line form is interesting but - paradoxically - might be too restricting.
Does it always have to rhyme?
Thanks for enlightening me.