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Remembrance

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BOOM - the cannon loosed itself

Significance was sounded

 

THUD - the moment hit oneself

It's message then resounded

 

ACHE - memories returned to me

And for that moment bounded

 

An ageing but still tender heart

With pride and pain it pounded

 

HELL - in realising that

Through remembrance I am hounded

 

Forever reminiscing that

I faced and fought and floundered

◄ Bump!

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Noetic-fret!

Mon 23rd Feb 2009 03:16

Nice one!
Mike

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