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Christopher Dawson

Updated: Mon, 9 Mar 2009 04:21 pm

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Biography

Just as it comes, as and when. Cambridge. I'm actually 'Chris', but I'm not allowed to be, for now at least...really appreciate any time taken to drop me a line, but Christopher does seem a tad stuffy no? Many thanks, Chris/Christopher/ **@"~!/etc

Samples

Winding wound a windmill Blue Dancing like we used to do skylark breeze and Jasmine air loving grass on feet kicked Bare A moment’s World for us to hold a Memory so gently sold the child’s Season long but passed Eternal summer cannot last....

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 24th Nov 2009 08:35

Hello Chris. Thank you for your comment on my dancing men poem. It's interesting that you enjoyed the first bit. I like the last bit, think the first bit is a meant-to-be cliche, and the two lines that join them are a bit rubbish - don't flow, too clunky, unless you say them in the right rythmn! I wrote the poem as a love letter to practical, scruffy, unassuming anorak type men, ( I used to work surrounded by them, in a previous existance) and the bit I think works for me are the last two lines. Or maybe the last three words!

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Nichola Burrows

Wed 28th Oct 2009 17:58

Hi Chris, I must agree with Isobel that is a very nice bottom, wish that mine was still like that!

I really do think that 'Your Label' is good, not just good but interesting which is even better than good.

You've been around on here longer than me -
How do you find the site?x

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Christopher Dawson

Fri 4th Sep 2009 18:47

Correction Isobel, I had.

~smile~

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Isobel

Fri 4th Sep 2009 15:52

You have a very nice bottom Christopher.

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Gus Jonsson

Wed 18th Mar 2009 12:26

Thanks Chris

For the comments re How The Days Go By...

Haven't grabbed anyone in long enough..
Thanks again
Gus

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