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Lune Poetry

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Anger consumes me

Eats my soul like cancer

Self inflicted hell

 

Woman in mirror

Who is this old person

OMG it's me

 

A ghostly soldier

Wife and babe are alone

Price of Freedom

 

Mimes make rhymes

Sure Mimes can make rhymes

Who'd hear it

 

The many criticisms

Crash on me like thunder

Endure the storms

 

A hollow victory

Got to top of field

Lost my family

 

Shirley, bright meadow

Peaceful calm serenity

Doesn't fit me

 

Secrets and lies

Ate my soul slowly away

Almost destroyed me

 

His whistle echoes

The memories of my mind

Really miss Dad

 

The hotel had

A tacky 60's Las Vegas

Sun dried charm

 

The bird evolution

The almighty has forsaken you

Ostrich can't fly

 

Bought Hello Kitty

Dog ate stuffed Hello Kitty

Hello Kitty poop

 

Apocalypse has began

The zombies are a coming

Protect your brains

 

This the end?

Some asteroids were near misses

Going to hell?

 

First three words

Then it is five words

Next three words

 

First three syllables

Then it is five syllables

Then three again

 

The fishing hole

Toss a stone makes ripples

Water's turned green

 

Guns fall silent

Peace treaty has been signed

Fragile peace exists

 

Small bud withered

A few drops of rain

A beautiful flower

 

Cat on boob

All her weight on it

OWW! OWW! OWW!

 

A stolen poem

Took credit for my effort

Poem was removed

 

Half a heart

But she fills ours completely

Beautiful baby Isabella

lune poetry

◄ Daddy edited poem

Alliteration Poem About Anger ►

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Ged Thompson

Tue 27th Aug 2013 03:16

I love this in all its darkness, concise with hints off sporadic despair and confusion. Very honest and very very brave writing, well done for having the courage.

Ged X

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