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Phoenix

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“The only people for me are the mad ones, the ones who are mad to live, mad to talk, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at the same time, the ones who never yawn or say a commonplace thing, but burn, burn, burn like fabulous yellow roman candles exploding like spiders across the stars.” 

Jack Kerouac, On the Road

 

for Sal Paradise and Dean Moriarty

 

“The only people for me

are the mad ones”

was my credo. Then I became

a sub-editor and father,

and put away childish things.

Wary of accidents, literals,

legals, getting too excited

over anything.  Hunkered down

for the long haul to retirement,

careful not to allow

a word out of place.

Kept my eyes on the road ahead.

But the paper was losing money,

I was let out of class early,

no longer had a train to catch.

Freedom began to dawn on me.

 

 

They say euphoria writes white,

or, if you try it, badly.  Not true,

not the way Jack told it.

I know my destination,

but trust there’s still

a chance for a detour or two,  

something left in the tank.

For route 66, read Glencoe,

Fort Augustus, the Orkneys.

Could always write a headline

if I had a deadline to meet.

Kerouac left before his time,

from drink and football injuries.

Rough that the road ran out

for Neal and Jack

before they got to Phoenix.

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Jack KerouacOn the Road

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barrie singleton

Tue 22nd Oct 2013 02:07

Hi Greg. There is an energy in there that is all your own. It is getting past the words to me. Thanks for kind comments some years back.

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David Blake

Thu 10th Oct 2013 16:12

Liked this very much, Greg.

Philipos

Wed 18th Sep 2013 21:13

Let out of class early eh Greg! Glad to see you're still on top form & you are right of course to rejoice in the challenge of becoming a retiree. Keep those horizons coming & an eagle eye open for forthcoming evening events in Woking library, if you haven't already done so of course.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 17th Sep 2013 15:06

Interesting and reflective Greg. Isn't it strange how we tell ourselves "when I retire I'll" etc etc, and then not seem to have the time to do them.

I still have journeys to make and books to write and heros to converse with. Strange how some of our heroes appear just the same as us when we finally get to speak to them.

Remember, journeys do not always have to be tangible. I think I've thought of a new subject for a poem now!

Anyway, keep on keeping on Greg. Always a good 'un to read.

Graham

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jane wilcock

Mon 16th Sep 2013 20:26

I enjoyed this: we walk our own roads, it is out own tread upon the earth.

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Isobel

Mon 16th Sep 2013 13:41

I enjoyed this Greg. Though inspired by your own life, it's outward looking. I hope you now get to do all the mad things that mad people do - just wish I could join you!

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