Transit
Unsure, Unopposed
lying in my arms
fleeting captivity
of bittersweet blossom
transient beauty as it falls
melting into the ground
and you’re gone
© Katypoetess 2013
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Unsure, Unopposed
lying in my arms
fleeting captivity
of bittersweet blossom
transient beauty as it falls
melting into the ground
and you’re gone
© Katypoetess 2013
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<Deleted User> (11485)
Sat 28th Sep 2013 16:02
I like the idea of conquest in the first three lines and the gender reversal that's implied; I'd like, personally, to see it carried through to the end.