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The manikin and the mannequin

Four years old, 

meandering Marksies with mum,

following the fancy of his feet, 

the manikin sees the mannequin.

Is drawn, fascinated.

Stands before the bikini-clad female figure

as if in worship.

Reaches out and touches.

Touches the cloth,

touches the naughty bits,

the .....would you call it skin?

His mother, my daughter-in-law,

is splitting her sides beside me.

We are all smiling

at his gentle, caressing exploration,

his innocence.

I want some of that. 

I want that innocence in me. 

I want to give it to my beloved.

I want to live it.

 

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 28th Oct 2013 12:29

Dave, don't be offput by lack of comments; this is really topical and typical, charming and well-written. Maybe the current readers are all in childless environments - their loss. How does anyone forget childlikeness? All my life I have been influenced by the Biblical story of 'Jesus and the little children' because the story expresses pure wisdom from whatever level, or angle, you approach it.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 24th Oct 2013 11:37

Good one, Dave. Well-expressed. Excellent title. What are the 'naughty bits'?

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barrie singleton

Tue 22nd Oct 2013 02:25

Hi Dave - back after a few years so first must thank you for kind comment. I love your word plays. This one has a lovely irreverence like the old sea-side post cards. Yo are clearly loving retirement.

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