Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Remembered Hallowe’ens of Childhood

I dream of Hallowe’en when we were children:

No transatlantic pumpkin at our sides

But turnip dug by dad from frost-streaked garden

And carved with care with chore-dulled kitchen knife

Till gaping, gap-toothed grin emerged. Then, skewered

By knitting needle, safe-secured by string,

With stub of candle craftily inserted

In hot-wax solder, to secure its grip.

 

Thin pins affixed the lid, cut raw and artless,

As pale-pink, trembling hands held high aloft

The leering lantern, bright amidst the darkness,

With stench of charring turnip on the drift

Of autumn air, to chime with leaf-fall bonfire.

Ghost-children, clad with tattered, white-sheet rags

Would prowl around, performing knock-down-ginger

On primed relations, armed with paper bags.

 

Their generous gifts were treacle-fudge or toffee,

Home-made in time-worn, copper-bottomed pan,

Poured out to set in buttered, tinplate cake-tray

Cut carefully in squares by skilful hands.

Accepted gratefully, these simple sweeties

Would blacken teeth but. in those long-lost days,

No notion had we then of healthy eating,

Just after rationing had met its fate.

 

Those days held no commercial trick-or-treating:

Homely apple-bobbing was our fun,

With fallen fruit from orchard for our eating

Or set in rock-hard toffee by our mum.

We children rampaged round the sleepy village

With ghostly howls and whoops upon our lips,

Like hordes of Vikings out to spoil and pillage

But still more innocent than today’s kids.

Halloween

◄ A Case for Cancelling Christmas

I want a New Computer ►

Comments

Profile image

Starfish

Tue 29th Oct 2013 21:11

Was going to mention what a pleasure this was to read and the feeling of nostalgia it induces only to find that I am plagiarising Cynthia's comment. Sorry. Vividly descriptive too.
Starfish

Profile image

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 27th Oct 2013 16:17

Great posting and a pleasure to read. It rolls along, keeping the reader in a smiling nostalgia. I best liked the first two stanzas and the last one. IMO, you could probably do without the morallising one, Stanza Three, which is a bit of a mood dampener. But true enough, and it's your poem.

Profile image

John Coopey

Fri 25th Oct 2013 00:06

Enjoyed this nostalgic pastiche, Richard. I too was brought up on penny bangers and thre'p'ny canons. Or, if not a turnip, a tin can with holes punched in it, swung around with irresponsible disregard for health and safety.
I particularly like the image of "stench of charring turnip on the drift".
I'm not as fond of the rhythm of the final line though, which seems to clunk a bit.
Good that you're back.

Profile image

C Richard Miles

Thu 24th Oct 2013 19:05

Not been on here for a while but thought I'd post this one after digging it out of the archives to share something seasonal with work colleagues!

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message