Nature`s `revenge`
(re-titled, revised and `sonnetised`)
At the multicultural fellowing,
The steel-pans softly mellowing,
I watched her for a long, long while,
Dancing with a lithely grace,
Wondering: `Did she never smile`?
This lady from the far-off place.
Then suddenly, like daybreak beaming-
Ivory through a forest gleaming -
Laughter, lightening her face,
Spread sunshine through a shady place.
And sent one shaft, like Cupid`s dart,
Clean through the sinews of my heart.
And since, No matter how I crave,
History`s flipped – now I`m the slave.
barrie singleton
Thu 31st Oct 2013 00:01
Hey Harry! A chap who applies 'lithely' with such aplomb even panache nay consummate elan, while probably creating a new part of speech (?)
constitutes a formidable (said Frenchwise) opponent! I yield! Apart from that; it's a cracking composition.