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A girl sat on a beach

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A girl sat on a beach

An empty beach in solitude

Hundreds flocked around her

Alone resting on one arm

Legs to her side

The sun so high

Her frame so small

She left no shadow

She churned sand with a small red plastic spade

Glazed grains sifted

Sieved by a warm gentle breeze

Her family black hair, dry in the heat

Wild in the wind and salt

Her skin ever darkening

Pale blue pants ever lightening

She churned

With the rhythm of a dream

Slow time

Her time

A time where no one could touch her

So unlike the quiet moments at home.

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winston plowes

Sat 7th Mar 2009 22:59

This is great stuff christopher - I had to read through a few times to tease out the best bits. It was a sad/rewarding/descovering process.
Winston

<Deleted User> (5812)

Fri 6th Mar 2009 11:23

lovely strong imagery and beautiful descriptions carry you through to the (her) deep sadness at the end. x

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