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Morning

 
 
Its as if all measurable things
have become a threat –
clock faces that untwine our limbs,
second hands that drag our sleepy thoughts
to work,  the seperation of each step away –
metres, miles -
impossible to train for; no rest allowing
of this – to go to  different places in the day.
 
Like my dreams, half understood;
each a story of  faulty echoes –
these words I take back in the morning
to say to you and make sense;
you seem too faraway when we close our eyes,
falling asleep in my hair.
 
It has found things to settle on;
a clip of sunlight, the shape of a leaf;
a rigid puddle of water – no subject so old
that a morning can not make
the curl of hands under the pillows;
cherub slumber buds,
so stay, stay,  where the murmur of night
 
is left on our lips -
let the corners of the morning
be drawn without us.

 

 

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 18th Nov 2013 13:42

Dazzling - and emotive, and poignant. I echo Philipos completely - my faves: 'falling asleep in my hair' because it can mean almost anything; even the obvious is truly enchanting. And 'a clip of sunlight'-what an unusual metaphor.

Philipos

Wed 13th Nov 2013 17:17

So many evocative images here. Loved especially 'The curl of hands under the pillows'.

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Tue 12th Nov 2013 14:29

it does indeed.

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Tue 12th Nov 2013 14:27

All time moves with or without us...

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