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The Evergreens

 
They have this idea
to spend the year chatting,
lining the walls of the back garden;
 
their dresses ruffling with
every whispered tickle of birdsong.
Regal they are, lasting in their plump
 
precision; perhaps a grandmother
to all trees, whistling, offering
pinecones - I find them hopeful
 
of a hug every time I pass them.
As a child, I gave them my
bruised knees, my cobwebbed
 
fingers and torn sleeves,
tear damp from losing
all my imaginaries, taking theirs –
 
their greens – nuzzling into.
Over the kitchen sink
I see them now as if I never
 
grew beyond the bottom
 of their branches, their belly
bright ways unchanging.

 

◄ Morning

Lilac ►

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 9th Dec 2013 23:33

A whispered tickle of birdsong.

Why can't I think of words like that? A quite lovely piece.

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Laura Taylor

Mon 9th Dec 2013 11:25

It is a really lovely poem. So well written, as ever.

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Mon 9th Dec 2013 10:41

thank you Isobel, it is lovely to think you share same the same feeling.

take care.

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Isobel

Sat 7th Dec 2013 09:31

Lovely poem Mariane.

Trees through the eyes of a child - yes, I think they would symbolise freedom and hope for me too.

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