waiting wanting
...along the shoreline water's edge ...I skim across its foaming roar, ...I see her standing on the ledge... of rock and waiting wanting more...
foto and words Tommy Carroll
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<Deleted User> (11750)
Mon 30th Dec 2013 18:44
I LOVE this. I'm new to this website and have been looking at numerous poems but this is the first one I've found that's really caught my attention. Do you have your own blog? I have just created one. Maybe you'd like to see it? http://lifeastoldbymypen.weebly.com/
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Lynn Dye
Mon 30th Dec 2013 23:12
Enjoyed this, Tommy, good one :-)