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Muses

 
Take the dustbins, the quietness of  little
city growths – why do they not do?
 
Not count? People get lost, but places too –
and somewhere a car-park is wandering
in limerance without a painter’s touch.
 
 
See now how the bus stop crouches in the cold,
it’s head frightened, loosening up branches behind -
 
you do not love it,
you choose others
and its embraces are where trees have been slighted.
 
That traffic cone, must it be?
A suicide unnoticed?
Ophelia’s riches are blocked in warning –
a silver stripe across their back
 
watching the accidents of men
who disappear and leave them mad.
 
I hope that the lamp posts
out on the street
are secretly conspiring
to love each other.

 

 

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Tue 14th Jan 2014 15:28

thank you for the time and comments. xx

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garside

Fri 10th Jan 2014 13:30

watching accidents of men
who disappear and leave them mad

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Francine

Wed 8th Jan 2014 19:52

In limerence... :-)
Love the ending too!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 7th Jan 2014 12:51

I have always wondered what a 'metaphysical conceit' might actually be. That flash of original comparison.

I was reading only last week a 'brush-up' of the nine Muses - and here you are, with an extraordinary approach to the very thing. I'm forever forgetting the breadth of the subject matter included - and even now the unusual name of 'their mother' escapes me - although not the mighty Zeus himself.

Very enjoyable. A poet's mind encompasses all things with the clarity of imagination.

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Andy Ainsworth

Tue 7th Jan 2014 11:35

I really enjoyed this poem, Marianne. Quite intriguing and dark with a glimmer of hope in that last stanza.

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