Second of January

From winter storms

a day of sun

at four-fifteen

see magic spun.

On western skyline

charcoal clouds brew

such stark contrast

in sky still blue.

Deprived of sunset

how strange, I think

just three contrails

are brightest pink.

I thank the planes

for detection

their rosy vapour

sun reflection.

◄ Secrets of the Willow

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Lynn Dye

Sat 11th Jan 2014 16:12

Thank you, Solar x

<Deleted User> (9882)

Thu 9th Jan 2014 16:53

I agree with all previous comments Lynn.
Well done!.x

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Lynn Dye

Wed 8th Jan 2014 20:32

Thank you very much, Mike and Patricia & Stef xx

<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 8th Jan 2014 19:18

'charcoal clouds'
Nice line Lynn and a lovely wistful poem.xx

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Mike Hilton

Wed 8th Jan 2014 15:40

Nice poem Lynn I can see myself painting this just on your words alone.

Mike

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