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Promised poem for Kathy after the party

 

(Lines for the lady medic)

 

You`ll laugh and say, `That poets in a plight`

That, `He`ll remember nothing` or maybe fret,

That `being three-parts tipsy on the night

the things he said were anyway all lies`

 

But, love, could I forget,

How the laughter, capering with the light,

Danced wild Antrim-antics in your eyes?

Or that your voice had in it, when you talked,

The sound of the west wind waking an Irish dawn

(Full of quiet lilt) And, Kathy – when you walked –

How you queened it, to the manner born.

 

You mourned some complicated love affair

And as you spoke it seemed the music died,

And all the choristers of the upper-air

Fled to some far corner of heaven and cried

 

(But none of this, nor your unlikely trade,

Lent the poet`s power to my pen.

But–when you`d gone–the way your memory made

The affection come in the voices of the men.)

◄ AT THE CRIB

While waiting for inspiration ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 10th Jan 2014 10:36

made us almost laugh and cry at the same time.xx

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Laura Taylor

Fri 10th Jan 2014 10:32

Aww, what a lovely poem. I can almost see her :) Glad you got that date :D

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Jonnie Falafel

Fri 10th Jan 2014 08:35

Lovely poem Harry. Captures that moment of being overthrown by a constellation of things -music, the light, her beauty.... and she was a doctor? Good catch!

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 9th Jan 2014 21:32


I know John, I have to need somethin` goin` for me.

I took her to see Macbeth, and she insisted on
pointing out that McDuff`s blood was the wrong colour...She was, though, lovely...and very, very Irish. I couldn`t believe my luck.

(That one on my profile was a goodbye one for her)

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John Coopey

Thu 9th Jan 2014 21:22

...it was, though, beautiful. I'd have opened up myself for you.

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John Coopey

Thu 9th Jan 2014 21:21

You're a randy old goat, Harry!
With looks like yours, though, good luck with the poetry!

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Starfish

Thu 9th Jan 2014 21:10

And rightly so - it is beautiful.

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 9th Jan 2014 20:49


A revised re-post of one of the disappeared and the only poem that ever, ever, won me the date.

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