Fiesty old pro-choice Celia`s dream
Celia would say with that sly old knowing wink:
`If this Almighty really existed wouldn`t you think
That he`d want us unbelieving folk to know himself
And so would simply , unmistakeably show himself,
Rise up in all his splendour, wiggle his magic wand,
Bid all the world`s wickedness shrivel, flee, abscond?
I mean, why so shy? so bashful? keep himself so hid,
Why not just materialise, kick out, banish, and get rid?`
Until one night –in Celia`s dream–the Almighty did?
Transported her to a far, transtellar height,
Spread all the world below her in the night,
And then–before her dazed, astounded sight
Bid every sinful, stinking thing take flight!.
Till his sullen world lay chastened in the dark
Cleansed, indifferent, tedious, drab and stark.
Then splendidly rose amid that shadowy land
A winged white stallion, reins tight in the hand
Of a tall, proud, valiant silver-armoured knight
Who leapt astride the stallion and took flight,
Curving a wide-ranging, silver-scintillant arc
Above the vast, twinkling, starry- studded dark.
Who was that?` asked Celia, shocked - amazed
The Almighty mourned, compassion in his gaze
And (as Worth and Merit crumbled in his voice)
Answered Celia sadly.……`His name was Choice`.
Neil Fawcett
Thu 13th Feb 2014 15:59
Ah, the compatibility of free-will and the existence of an omnipotent divinity. Well put, beautifully constructed. Only a couple of jars for me line 7 'hid'... 'starry' wouldn't star suffice? Maybe a little self conscious of the syllable count on occasion. Apart from that a hugely enjoyable read.