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The Mirror

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My first apartment

was in a bad neighborhood.

The apartment was small

and rat infested.

 

The mirror in my

bedroom had a

dark shadowy spot

in the corner.

 

It looked creepy but

I told myself to ignore it.

But sometimes I swear

the shadow pulsated

like it was breathing.

 

When my lease ran out

I moved to a great neighborhood.

My apartment was modern,

roomy and airy.

 

The apartment was perfect.

Except for one little flaw.

The mirror in my bedroom

had a dark shadowy spot

that pulsated like

it was breathing.
 

Apartment   Creepy   mirror

â—„ The Sea Haiku

Wild Wolves â–º

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Sat 25th Jan 2014 17:16

one of your best Shirley.x

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sat 25th Jan 2014 17:16

one of your best Shirley.x

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Nigel Astell

Wed 22nd Jan 2014 13:58

Trapped

Is that my shadow breathing
on that dark deadly spot
or does this ghost mirror
have a spirit trapped inside
waiting to take my place
when fast asleep in bed.

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