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Snapshots

You mourn old photographs:

‘I was pretty then, and I never knew it.’

 

I’ve just filled an album

with our last pieces of paper

before digital took over:

It includes my mother’s 80th birthday

(she just missed out on 90).

A fabulous, tearful, joyous Sikh wedding,

dancing to the bhangra boy’s beat,

the marriage lasting little more

than a year. That holiday in Sorrento;

the kids came with us for one last time

because it was a posh hotel.  

You sunbathing in the garden;

still pretty, despite your protestations.

A precious reunion

with your best friend at university

and her family in the Highlands.

My ignominious attempt at rowing

across a sea loch, only surviving

because the wind blew

in the right direction.

Bust of Hemingway in Pamplona.

The smile of our beautiful daughter.

A favourite uncle blowing bubbles

at a reception. You in twilight

on the Clifton bridge.

 

Those were some years.

The forgotten photographs

surprise me, too, as I catch

myself puzzling

who was that bloke,

smart in light jacket and trousers,

captured, like a ghost, beneath

the big wheel at Galway?

 

 

Photographs

◄ Plain Man's Valentine

To My Unknown Soldier ►

Comments

Preeti Sinha

Mon 18th Aug 2014 10:50

Makes me want to take a look at my parents old photos and see the world through their eyes when their dreams were different.

Nostalgia at its best, Greg. Some pensiveness perhaps? A slight longing, maybe?

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Tina Ford

Thu 6th Feb 2014 23:29

i really like this :D

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Laura Taylor

Tue 28th Jan 2014 10:13

But Greg - poems ARE personal, an awful lot of the time. That's what connects them with the reader :)

I think that's a grand idea actually - expanding on them. You could have a series of poems, interlinked. Gwan gwan gwan - you have loads of time and energy! ;)

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Greg Freeman

Mon 27th Jan 2014 15:49

Thanks for all the comments, chums. I was concerned that this poem would seem too personal ... I found myself thinking that each one of the images could make a poem in its own right, if I had the time and energy. And, yes, who was that stranger beneath the big wheel? How did he get in the picture?

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 27th Jan 2014 15:39


Gregg,
I was struck by the way your:

`the marriage lasting little more

than a year.`

instead of darkening ( perhaps by its almost unnoticed asideness?)somehow adds to the lovely nostalgia of the rest. Also that bit of
puzzled un-recognition at the end.

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Isobel

Mon 27th Jan 2014 13:02

Lovely poem Greg! You can't beat proper photo albums - we all know it and yet how many of us are organised enough to get our digital photos onto hard copy?

And yes, I totally agree with Laura here - I spent a big chunk of my life thinking I was ugly - but the photos don't reflect that. Good lucks are at least 80% about how you feel inside and how you project yourself...

This kind of reflective poetry suits you Greg. Give me humanity over machinery every time :) x

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John Coopey

Mon 27th Jan 2014 10:35

Marvellous series of images both universal and personal.
Precious, Greg, precious.

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 27th Jan 2014 10:27

Eee! Proper nostalgia, this.

I love this Greg. It is not just about nostalgia for the images in the photos and the lost youth, but also for photos as a tactile, physical object. You can't beat an album - one that you can open and close - for true memories.

A lovely, loving poem. By the way, re last para, line, five, who was it? Give us a clue?

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Laura Taylor

Mon 27th Jan 2014 09:50

Awww, I love this. I reckon loads of women will see themselves in the first two lines too, I know I did. I always thought I was really weird-looking. When I look back at those photos now, I think the same thing as you've written :)

This is a lovely nostalgia-soaked poem Greg, and one that most if not all people will identify with.

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