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Another working week

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A sunny day, a windy day, and rain

Combined to stun us on our walks outside

A busy day, a meetings day, the strain

Of finding boxfuls of emails to read

Like minefields over which we slowly stride

Defusing each problem and each complaint

Before we can begin then to decide

Which long-delayed project we now attempt

Which one to resurrect, which should be dumped

Back onto the backburner once again

And this same frustration extends inside

To crowded private lives squeezed to the end

Of each day’s tasks, when we’d rather have lain

Inert, or with a new lover, or cried

◄ Barbarossa v Barbarella

Hot Cross Bun ►

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<Deleted User> (5646)

Tue 24th Mar 2009 11:01

Aye. It's a hard life when work takes you travelling across the globe. ha ha.

Sorry. couldn't resist the little quip.
I've often wondered why people (me included) call writings of poetry etc.. is work.
Something we're supposed to enjoy.
Whatever happened to the happy work-force?

Love the theme and oddly enough, your attitude to it. A little at odds with mundane necessity. :-)

Janet.x

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Jon

Tue 24th Mar 2009 10:54

Loved it! Especially the line about finding boxfuls of e-mails to be similar to minefields!
Your frustration "shines" through!

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Francine

Tue 24th Mar 2009 09:46

Very nice Antonionioni...
I can totally relate to this...
At times you don't know what and where
to begin...

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Anthony Emmerson

Mon 23rd Mar 2009 23:13

Hi Antonionioni,
Ah the futility of modern working life and wage slavery - a worthy theme. When viewed in the context of wider fulfillment and happiness just how important is it? Not very I would hazard a guess. We are all becoming the automata of corporate interests and fast losing our individual identities. Perhaps poetry may save us, we certainly need some new ideas. Noble sentiments, well expressed.
Regards,
A.E.

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