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I only asked...

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I only asked for a few things...

the unique instant of feeling inside you,

to seal my lips and without speaking,  say “I love you”

 

Your life, in every corner of my hands,

the epitome of my dreams,

in the suns, in my thoughts,

drenched in glory

 

And grew for those whom thought it real!

 

Everything seemed like I dreamt you...

I don’t know, don’t know what I felt,

I was helpless, wiped your tears

and embraced the exact moment of cuddles and kisses

 

Today, the heartbeats disagree…

 

What is left except your vanity?

The coldness attached to by bones, the scent of herbs from your skin?

and still, I will love you more than life

 

Alone, I recall your footsteps, to fill me with sunlight 

y return to the valley where the hours are absent,

you’re not here…, I have to abort your silhouette from my pupils

and still, I will love you more than life

 

©Noris Roberts

love poetry

◄ Was there never a time for me?

Inspiration... ►

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Noris Roberts

Tue 29th Apr 2014 00:29

Carly
Only love can lead us to the elevation of the soul, joy and happiness, even when mistakes are made, but sometimes it also inflicts wounds and leave very deep scars that are almost impossible to erase and yet we still love love.

Thank you for reading me.

<Deleted User> (12166)

Fri 25th Apr 2014 16:33

"Your life, in every corner of my hands,

the epitome of my dreams,

in the suns, in my thoughts,

drenched in glory"

The whole poem, especially the lines above this that I just pasted, are immensely powerful to me, it brings me to my own experiences and makes me think of how love is blind because truly new love consumes your every thought. Great poem!!! :)

 

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