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The Battle

Once I lost 

Half a battle

In half a war 

Won half a victory 

Took

Half the glory

Stood half 

My ground

Faced half the

People

Slept half 

A dream 

Lived half a 

Life

And wondered

Half the time

Why I bothered

At all

To fight half 

My bitterness

For half the things

I never wanted

In the

First place

For half a world

That I didn't believe

In

For most of 

The time

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 30th Apr 2014 12:10

Punchy, and sadly too true of so many of us.

I'm surprised that you have not had more feedback on your work; but commenting has tailed off remarkably this year. Anyway, I think WOL does reach a wide reading audience, even if individuals no longer respond so often.

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