Ferris ocularity,
observing holy motion,
facilitates the weaving
of an elemental web.
Cirrus drips precipitate
a waving,
all devoted to rotation,
sewing oceanic lace
and braiding rain
to brine the breeze.
Pleasure seeks a penny slot
as bed and breakfast tongues
lick the candy cane locale.
Sunday shoes clatter on a jetty,
all skeletal,
pirouetting as they
echo
echo
echo
oscillation.
Photo courtesy of Rich Pictures Photography
Well - a masterpiece of original thought, dynamic imagery and the flying words to give them life in an Orgy of Musicality as you stream all the skills of word sounds throughout, in one continuous dance.
Nuff said. You'll think I'm barmy.
Eh up - thank you very much Steve :)
Tis a shame the photo only came out small - but I've put a link on to show it bigger anyway.
steve mellor
Sun 8th Jun 2014 17:05
Really, really liked the piece. Nothing else needs saying (from me anyway)
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Laura Taylor
Tue 10th Jun 2014 13:27
Hey Cynth - why thank you. Mmmm dynamic is what I was going for, with interconnectedness. I've realised this is a major theme in a lot of my writing - how everything ties in. And I don't seem to be able to rein in assonance or alliteration at ALL, so I'll just give them free rein. I'm sure at one point they'll get fed up themselves ;)