23:4 re-drawn
Mr Martlew
would you mind
if I sit awhile here
in the shade on my own,
you hushed in your hole,
in the valley of the shadow?
Shall I re-draw life
in the black lines etched above your bones?
Did it hurt?
Were you scared?
Do the stones weigh heavy?
Do they creak beneath the roses
and the green glass gravel?
Did it hurt?
Were you scared?
Were you ready
or not?
Mr Martlew
do you mind
if I sit awhile here?
Trace in the present tense
lichening past.
Walk through the valley of the shadow.
Then furrow in your full name,
husband and son.
Did it hurt?
Were you scared?
Are you there?
Can you see?
We can play I Spy
if you like
(just pretend).
Did it hurt?
Were you scared?
Were you ready
or not?
Mr Martlew
do you mind
if I sit awhile here
all alone, with your dust
and your teeth and your bones?
Through the valley of the shadow.
Did it hurt?
Thou art
Did they catch you
with me.
Did they kill you in the end?
We can play hide and seek
if you like
(just pretend).
Did it hurt?
Were you scared?
Were you ready
or not?
Photo courtesy of Richard Nixon, at Rich Pictures
Laura Taylor
Tue 1st Jul 2014 09:37
Hi Martin
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, appreciate it, and glad you liked it :)