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Don't Put Me in Your Box

Don't put me in your box.  
I need to explore.

Don't assign a shape to me.  
I bet mine has never been drawn.

Save your doubts of me.  
I've spent enough of my own.

You hide from failure and from success,
Keen on risking nothing.

Know that fear won't rest until a nest
It's made inside your heart.

Don't put me in your box of inflexibility,
Where dreams behave, ideas refrain,
And the only survivor is predictability.

I must go.  
You must let me go.  

In fact, don't even show me your box.  
I'll pretend it was never there.

 


© Candice Reineke 2014

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Dominique Smith-Bryant

Tue 8th Jul 2014 19:44

I really like this piece. It's so relatable yet anyone who reads it can make it their own. Very nice

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Candice Reineke

Mon 7th Jul 2014 20:15

Cynthia, thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment :) The box is all about fear. As human beings, we will always be fighting fear: our own comfort zones and other peoples' expectations of us...our own box, their box and society's box. This line is actually a proclamation: I've learned that fear is relentless but have decided to not let it beat me. It's also a warning to others: don't let fear make its home inside your heart. I see that maybe this line doesn't really flow but thought it essential to break free from tidiness in form. Hence the cry: don't put me inside your box ;)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 7th Jul 2014 17:05

I like this too. Excellent ideas neatly expressed. I'm not sure how stanza 5 works; it eludes me completely.

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Laura Taylor

Wed 2nd Jul 2014 09:37

Love the sentiment of this, and as already said, you have a distinct 'voice'. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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