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Two Trees Bending

Two trees bending,
Heads touching brows
Under starlight,
Sunrise,
Sunset,
Moonlight.

Beneath; a pool,
Swilling softly into peaks
Of undulating rhythms.

And save for swaying, nothing moves.
Nothing has to.
Sitting on its dewy banks,

Time dancing on tiptoes,
So as not to disturb the hush
Of sunsets watching silent souls sleeping.

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Phillip Kelly

Tue 8th Jul 2014 23:46

oh wow....a very impressive spontaneous poem...which uses immensely effective personficcation of time, tress, and the pool.
its like...you captured a perfect moment in time with your writing....AMAZING. !!.

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